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Please note that the comments below are for general feedback/discussion of the draft. All comments should contribute to or clarify dialogue, not do other things like ask questions about whether the article is interesting or what should be written next. ## I noticed many grammatical errors which are hard to understand because of this. I think you could fix these by adding commas, singular instead of plural words, and taking out any unnecessary words or sentences that don't contribute to your point. For example: "Corel knockout 2 plug-in for Adobe Photoshop 64 bit torrent." Here is how it would be changed: "Corel knockout 2 plug-in for Adobe Photoshop (64 bit version). ogg". The extra words in your sentence don't help since they are just there to fill up the space. ## The article seems like it has good information (and isn't too long), but it needs a lot of grammar and spelling edits. If you fix these, the article would be much more easy to read and I would probably stop here to see if this is a real program or not (I did actually check for myself and it turns out it is, which means this article did serve its purpose). I'm somewhat surprised at how popular this search results page is; if you fix up the page, it could be really useful for people who want to get rid of their acne. ## I think you should try to change your article more into a point of view. I know that is not that easy, but i am sure if you work on it, it will be much better :). I am not saying that your article is bad or something like that, its just my opinion. Well, the downside right now is the fact you are not able to creat links to other pages. But I think you can fix this by adding some stuff about how the program works and why its good at what it does. ## I think your article is a great resource for this program. I used it and it completely took away my acne in a matter of days, and after several weeks, i was left with no acne at all. This program is a great way to eliminate the problem of acne on the face and body. ## I went to your company website and read that you had some kind of breakthrough or something like that, but then they show an image of customer support which makes it even less sincere. It would be nice if you could show some kind of before and after pictures or something which shows that your product is actually doing the trick. ## I think your article is interesting. However, i am not quite sure how this relates to wikipedia. Also, there are quite a few spelling mistakes that need to be corrected. Before you put up an article, you should really spell check it. However, I do like what you have to say about acne and how there are people out there who dont know about this program (because it really does work) but since this article doesnt sound like its from a reputable source (maybe because of the spelling mistakes and no credibility for the author), i probably wont try it.... eccc085e13
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